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You really are shameless, aren't you. I mean like Oh my god, i have read translated MTL novels that have better English than your novel and to think you even shamelessly ask for gifts,there is a limit dude to stoop so low and forgo your dignity and ask for gifts for this idiotic novel. Learn how to write in proper grammatical english and then think about writing a novel.People like you get carried away by all that motivational bullshit that is going in this world and think i can be anything in this world or i can do anything in this worls and write this piece of crap.Look Author if you dont have the gift of writing then dont write and save our and your time.Thank You.
You really are shameless, aren't you. I mean like Oh my god, i have read translated MTL novels that have better English than your novel and to think you even shamelessly ask for gifts,there is a limit dude to stoop so low and forgo your dignity and ask for gifts for this idiotic novel. Learn how to write in proper grammatical english and then think about writing a novel.People like you get carried away by all that motivational bullshit that is going in this world and think i can be anything in this world or i can do anything in this worls and write this piece of crap.Look Author if you dont have the gift of writing then dont write and save our and your time.Thank You.
Oh..Who might this be,author from a different account or again a paid review.I give zero f**ks if you think I am worse just because I rated this novel 1-star.If I was given a chance in would do it again you why bcoz I put my hard earned money to buy coins and read novels and I need my money's worth.Of course you might be a useless yougmaster of some wealthy family who has money to spare and a dead brain who thinks these types of novels are great or you just might be someone with a childish mind and ego who cannot take others criticism in positive light and always has have the last word.So in conclusion yes I gave the novel 1 -star for it is worth that so BITE ME!
can you please recommend some ...bcoz i havent been able to find them
The people who have given 3 to 4 stars to this idiotic novel must have their brain damaged or are paid reviews. This is clearly an MTL and the author or the translator havent even edited the chapters.so many mistakes like stepmothe becomes wife in one chapter and birth mother in next chapter.Names keep on changing and dont even get me started on the grammar.Just wirting this bad review is already doing a favour for this novel.
This book is so trash that even among the trashes it comes at the bottom.Names keep changing every now and then and new people's names keep introduced without even telling who they are.This is a new level trashiness and to think webnovel allowed this,really the standards of webnovel kepp dropping further and further.And don't even get me started on the story or character of MC.He does so many brainless things that I believe even a new born baby's decision-making and intelligence would be better than the MC.This book has made me so frustrated that I would like the author to take a printout of your book and choke on it.
He recognised Mt. Tai
The MC in this story is an original(non-isekaied MC) so he has the same problems all teenagers of his age have stupidity, hotbloodedness, indecisive.See this is why i dont like these original MC's.Isekaied MC's are better because they would atleast have mental maturity to form good decisions.This what these idiot authors dont understand we are not here to read a normal MC acting like a normal tennager, we all see that in the real world daily and we are sick of it.We are here to read about a mature MC who makes mature decisions and a MC that is not possible in the real world beacause what you are writing is not reality story but a FANTASY FICTION(@author : read a dicitonary if you dont understand the meaning of those two words).
The story development is trash, character design very flawed,and the world background is not even introduced properly even after 200 chapters.The MC has an inheritance of Immortal cultivator but doesn't know many simple things in cultivation.In one chapter he advances like a monster but in the next he is beaten down to pulp like a dog.He doesn't use his inheritance properly,and keeps getting confused with the smallest of things like for example how to control pill fire or dark energy or chaotic body.How it it possible that the people of this world know all these things and there is nothing mentioned about these things in the immortals legacy.Truly pathetic.And the author doesn't know how to prepare opponents for the MC,he prepares a Level 100 opponent for Level 10 MC,and as usual he gets beaten down like a dog,and again the cliche plot of setting a date for battle in 1 year or 6 months.SAME CLICHE PLOT ROTATES THROUGH THE WHOLE NOVEL.AFTER WRITING THIS COPY PASTE STORY THE AUTHOR OR THE TRANSLATOR HAS THE AUDACITY TO START PAID CHAPTER FROM CHAPTER 16.If there was an option of giving 0 stars i would definitely give this story.
So he is okay with women going crazy in two or three days...?
DUDE IF YOU ARE TRANSLATING DO A PROPER JOB!
I just knew the first dialogue of the next chapter would be this.