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  • VL0C
    VL0C6mth
    Commented

    I think the author underestimated the stupidity of fanatic fans. They could find all the reasons just to defend the one they follow. Of course, their reaction could also be the result/effect of the MC's roleplay that made them believe easily.

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    My Roleplay System
    Fantasy · Lagaru
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  • VL0C
    VL0C6mth
    Commented

    As an introvert, I would've felt annoyed at the man, even though he meant no harm. I get that he was worried, but he was so chatty that it made me feel uncomfortable and cringe reading it, especially when it was all him assuming things.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Are you planning to hold me like this forever?
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    My Trillion-Dollar Assets is Exposed by My Wife's Bragging!
    Urban · Rainbow Bubble Fish
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  • VL0C
    VL0C7mth
    Commented

    This feels like it was written by chatgpt, or at least edited from or by it. Not criticizing the work, but the way the story flows didn't feel like human created for me.

    Ch 1 Assassination
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    The Strongest Assassin Reincarnates in Another World
    Fantasy · JALLEN
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  • VL0C
    VL0C7mth
    Commented

    The options sucks and are unbalanced, even more so is the choice he chooses.

    [Obtained Skill: True Evolution]
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    Naruto: Family System
    Anime & Comics · SoftCrow
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  • VL0C
    VL0C7mth
    Replied to FinnsRevenge

    In fact, if the author would write something like that, he should've just made his name Red from the start, anyway, the MC isn't a canon character of HP, but no— he made a nonsensical plot like this, is it just to increase the number of words? And I don't think, it would be for character development.

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    Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard
    Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
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  • VL0C
    VL0C7mth
    Posted

    I couldn't bear to continue after reading chapter 1. Honestly, it was the stupidest thing I've ever read, it was utter nonsense, and I don't have hope it would get better, especially when it was a harem and incest

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    Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard
    Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
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