Thank you, it seems I overlooked this detail when I scheduled the chapters for delayed publication. I have now posted the corrected half.

UPD: Please do not suggest any changes to the plot line, as I already have a planned ending for this fic.

I have gradually begun releasing edited versions of the chapters, but I am currently interested in your opinion regarding the quality of this chapter. Thank you for your attention.

Thank you for your feedback! In truth, I am not a native English speaker, but that's a weak excuse. The main justification I can offer is that this is a translation of my work written three years ago. In my opinion, the beginning of the work is quite weak, but my skills have improved over time.