OHHHHHHH. I THOGHT THE A1 UNIVERSE WILL SURVIVE. THE AUTHOR IS COOKING SOMETHING

I LOVED THE STORY. THERE ARE SOME ERRORS IN GRAMMER, IMPROVE IT THEN THE STORY WILL ALSO BECOME GREAT.THE REASON I GAVE 4.8 STARTS IS INCREASE WORD COUNT THEN I WILL EDIT THE REVIEW

everyone will focusing on maretin and john but don't forget that david is a MC too

wow very good. no chap tomarrow...oh...my...got

Wow super webnoval I liked the story plot and charecter design. The writing style is awesome. I can't believe that the author only have 17 years old wow what a great author wish my luck....you are my favourite author...iam a big fan of you