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    Sorry if my English is not the best, your story is quite interesting. I was quite surprised when you chose the partner, it was time to do something different from the others. As for the theme of Spider-Man, it is too difficult and complicated, really, very few would put up with it, I say this version of Peter is a music composer and just using his powers as a hobby and to protect his loved ones is more than enough for the average citizen of any country. And what to say, an absurdly attractive girlfriend and the life of a millionaire and powers, what more could you ask for? As for the harem, personally I have never been a big fan of this but if you know how to introduce it correctly,

    Ch 37 The cries of Help Don't Bother Me
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    and of course there will also be classic competition of who has the biggest, in this case the most striking and powerful power, I see him attacking those who do not have a striking ability like his to increase his ego, even though he asked me if you would give abilities to the children, the children are quite enough unpredictable and poor of their parents having to keep an eye on their now super children.

    Ch 150 150 - World Change
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
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    Excellent chapter, sorry if my English is not the best, unfortunately there are more bad people than good people in the world, so those who gain the possibility of having a skill will be only a couple of million, at least during the first decade with the progress that will be made. the earth in that universe those couple of million will become hundreds and then a quarter of humanity and then half.

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    excellent chapter sorry if my English is not the best the most in demand will be boku no hero style powers for common people and anime fans and they would not miss the opportunity to choose a power that is as close as possible to their favorite character, meanwhile, the doctors, police officers, firefighters would choose one that will benefit them in their respective jobs and does not expose them as much and of course that makes it much easier.

    Ch 144 144 - Crisis and Opportunity
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    Excellent story, sooner or later he will go to a world where he will be recorded or meet a being of tremendous power. Sorry if my English is not the best, I hope you don't mind.

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    Ghost Rider vs Horror Movies
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    excellent story, sorry if my English is not the best but the next invention should be a video game console, this will be the most harmless and the one that will interest Hiruzen and the technology department the least, but as soon as they see what it will do to people in particular in children, especially with the daimyo who, seeing what potential it has and to entertain himself in his palace, will greatly encourage the project and it is free from being copied since to begin with, even if the other nations have an idea of how to create the console, they do not They don't even have the slightest clue about how to make a game and this could also cause some problems like in our reality with the typical obsessive.

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    The Shopkeeper of Konoha
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    An apology if my English is not the best in terms of the story, it is something interesting, it would not be bad if you put more interaction between the characters, they are quite weak but continue like this and you will improve

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