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Raphis

Raphis

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Obsession and destiny are the strongest forms.

2023-08-29 JoinedAustralia
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  • Raphis
    Raphis4mth
    Posted

    Review and criticism are welcome here. Perhaps the main complaint is about the poor English grammar, I know. Until now, I am still trying to learn and improve. Hopefully, I can get better.As for the novel, there might be some chapters that are very sensitive and contrary to certain beliefs, but believe me, this is all fiction and has no connection to real events.

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    "This is my second novel that I've submitted for the December WPC contest. Please help me by adding it to your collection, and feel free to provide feedback if anything is lacking. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Mockin_bird5

    thsank

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Diamond_sunshine

    arigato

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to _Nightingale

    thanks

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    Actually, the storyline is good and easy to understand, but the issue lies in your writing. Try to change your writing and learn more vocabulary. But overall, the story is good.

    altalt
    Preeminence
    Fantasy · Auth_GT
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    This novel is currently participating in the WPC December contest, so I kindly ask for your continuous support for it. Thank you ;)

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    do you want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same

    altalt
    Chronicles of the Celestial Enigma
    Sci-fi · ZephyrNoirVale
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Auth_GT

    thank you for the review, I have also included your novel in my collection, I hope you keep the spirit of writing

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same

    altalt
    Myth of Destiny
    History · Lakers
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to BoneyWhiteGuy

    want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same

    altalt
    evolutionary hazard
    Fantasy · BoneyWhiteGuy
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Auth_GT

    I put your book in the collection first ;)

    altalt
    Preeminence
    Fantasy · Auth_GT
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Auth_GT

    OK, in a few hours I'll be back. Write a review for my novel 'I just want the best for you'

    altalt
    Preeminence
    Fantasy · Auth_GT
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Auth_GT
    altalt
    Preeminence
    Fantasy · Auth_GT
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Replied to Auth_GT

    Sure, it's like that. But if you don't want to, it's okay. I'm not forcing you.

    altalt
    Preeminence
    Fantasy · Auth_GT
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    Do you want to exchange reviews with me? Don't worry, I'll do the same.

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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    Do you want to exchange reviews with me? Don't worry, I'll do the same.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    Do you want to exchange reviews with me? Don't worry, I'll do the same.

    altalt
    Rising of a New Reaper
    Sci-fi · unknown946
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  • Raphis
    Raphis5mth
    Posted

    Do you want to exchange reviews with me? Don't worry, I'll do the same.

    altalt
    Rise of the Soul Guardians
    Fantasy · MFZEID
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