Researcher_Abrax
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The interaction between the two boys has not yet been sufficiently described. I like that they communicate, but neither of them has shown any clear character traits yet (except 'nice boy'). Although... maybe it's because I read one chapter at a time and could have forgotten something. This is not a criticism, we just need more situations where their development would be shown. But it is your task, the author, to find the balance so that the story is not boring, and the characters are described
It's going to be hard to keep the story going when you've made the characters so strong. I really hope that you have enough ideas, talent and patience to develop this story. I was really fascinated by the idea of a character returning to the past, despite the fact that he will not be the main character of the story. Fortunately, you immediately expanded the world and gave hints about the further development of events. However, don't forget that this is still Naruto. It's your writing and your decisions, but I hope to still read a story from the shinobi world