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Well new chapters aside... This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I won't go into too much detail but it has everything you would want in a fanfic. A strong protagonist who starts out relatively weak but becomes strong relatively quickly, but not for "free". The characters' relationships are not hollow and have weight. With the protagonist having a personality and progression. And as the story takes place in the wars before the birth of naruto, the story does not follow the "plot", wich let us be honest a history that follows every arc with minimal divergences are at most mid. The "system" is also not the most important and is almost minimal after the first chapters, which also enriches the story but also maintains the mechanics promised by the title of the story itself. And another plus, at least for me, is the lack of harem in the story.
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A bad story. The MC have no personality, He becomes OP fast, and worst of all The author does not know the timeline, like Hiruzen being hokage and minato is not the hokage but itachi is born, the third ninja war did not happen yet and so on... It is honestly a mess of a story it is just bad. The only good part is that it has a lot of chapters.
The Author does not know physics... I mean it is the basics of the laws of motion by Newton. For example if an object is falling in a speed "X" and it weight 100 whatever units and suddenly the weight became 1 unit, the speed "X" would not change. You can do this experiment with a bowling ball and a water balloon if you drop them both at the same time and they will reach the ground at the same time. The only thing that would affect the protagonist in this case is air resistance, but as he didn't turn into a paper or a feather and continued in the form of a human it doesn't change anything. Author, you are a little stupid.
This is one of the best stories that i have read in this website. With a lot of chapters and currently in the way that the story is going is nearing the end, with regular updates. The story development is also great not fast and not slow, with practically zero time skips, just some really minor ones and a bigger one after the end of the first volume. The major characters/pokemons are well developed with established personality, quirks and goals, there is romance in the story and it is not a main focus but it is there for people who like it, it is not exaggerated and the "harem" is more like a open relationship for the protagonist with only 2 lovers currently in the story. The world background is also great and well defined coming along with the plot nicely, and leaving out any holes with the addition or changes to the pokemon world. And finally the plot of the story starts really simple with the protagonist starting his journey in the pokemon world and slowly finding some characters/pokemons and powers related to the main plot that will later transform the story. The only down is the writing quality, that it is not really a down, it is just not in the great level of the story being "just" a good writing quality. I would recommend this story for anyone interested in a pokemon story.