What is up with the grammar I feel like I’m reading something that is being directly translated it sounds so formal I hope the writing gets better

He’s a sociopath, a sociopath is someone who doesn’t feel things like normal people and doesn’t do things based on right or wrong. The missing link he is talking about is empathy and the reason why he doesn’t base his actions on right or wrong is because he bases them on something more logical and human( survival)

The author set this up to fast, she’s creating a character who will love his mom and ostracize his dad. And why is he so excited to get attention 🤷‍♂️

The writing quality is perfect and I would read more books by the author. The fact that I don’t like the MC and am still reading this @ch400 shows this. The story develops well and the MC isn’t totally OP since there are people who can match him, which leads him to discover other feelings like inferiority and frustration. I like that almost every character develops, but I don’t like how biased the author is in making it clear that Rey is the only one for Alicia, how Alicia is so soft, getting angry everytime someone confronts Rey about something he’s done which is … The last thing I don’t like is how the MC always feels guilty about keeping secrets from her. It really is none of her business what his ambitions are and what he does. And why’d he get posessive over her from the start. Last degrading comment is how I would have really liked if advancing and leveling up was based on developing and understanding magic and its theory. It would have given us a greater sense that the MC actually works hard. And from the start it was amazing how Billy was made to be the villain.( It was obvious the moment, he talked about how his friend started hanging out with the big shots). Billy abandoned him because Rey was weak, though this was wrong, what would have happened if Rey actually went and talked it out with him. It’s not like there are a lot of people who liked him for who he is it was just because of situations. Alicia liked Rey because she had bad relations with past boys, was feeling lonely and Rey was literally the only person she observed most of the time causing her to develop interest in her loneliness. Adonis probably let the break up happen because he was thinking about the future where Billy and Alicia were together. BUT THE BIGGEST AND TRASHIEST THING IS HOW REY ACTUALLY LIKES A RELATIONSHIP WHERE HE IS SUPERIOR TO HIS FAMILIAR. THE BEST FAMILIAR RELATIONSHIP IS THAT WHERE YOUR FAMILIAR GIVES YOU ADVICE JOKES WITH YOU AND MAKES COMMENTS THROUGH YOUR MENTAL CONNECTION, AND ONE WHERE BOTH OF THEM NO EACH OTHER BETTER THAN ANYONE EVER COULD.