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The author has forsaken us. Long live the author.
such a short chapter. it'll be interesting to see if Vaans spirits react to Selene in some way
oh. making up new world rules now are we?
Stop saying, "on the other hand"... if you don't understand a turn of phrase and its proper usage, don't use it at all.
Overuse of adjectives. You spent more time showing how in love you are with language than actually telling a story.