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That bothers me about cultivator stories, they take time as if it were nothing: "he closed his eyes and in the blink of an eye a hundred billion years passed, it might seem like a lot but for a grower it's just opening and closing his eyes" I find it very stupid, time is time, a minute will be a minute here and in the world of my eggs, perhaps with a different name but time is the same
I love how you try to make the mc seem "cool" but he just seems more and more childish, this chapter felt like two kids' conversation about toys: child °1 "hey why don't you want the transformer" child°2 "I think that there are things more important than toys" child°1 "I see, then it's like adults say, you're growing up... but you know, I think that toys are a burden that our hearts must always carry, no matter how difficult it is I will always carry toys with me, I know it will be extremely difficult but it is the path I chose to grow up, so I will play and collect as many toys as my heart desires" child°2 "haha.... so after all I am still a child who does not understand everything ... you are more mature than me my friend, I need to grow up... give me that toy and friend...... thank you, I will count on you to guide me when I lose my way" *he looks at the horizon in an extremely cool way*
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Wasn't the idea bad?... friend, the idea is stupid, even for a fantasy novel it is a bad idea