Honestly, the writing quality is kinda bad. The author is of course new so this should be forgiven to a huge extent, he/she will obviously get better with time but as of right now, there are a lot of grammatical errors. It's hard to connect with the story or the MC but as for the plus points, the author's writing skills seem to be improving quite consistently. Within a few more chapters, I imagine that this would be a good read but as of now I would say it's meh. If the author shows consistent improvement like he has for the first few chapters, I would definitely be inclined to change this review.