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So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.
Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice
I have only just finished the 6th chapter but I think that this book has potential, keep writing author many other authors will quit when they don't see progress in views but just keep writing
Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors
Solid first chapter