A few more combats, and the final round will be complete! All caught up on standard released chapters, too. May 31, 2024

Probably not. Acoustics are something places have, not people. Bad acoustics means it's hard to hear, or hard to catch certain sounds, like conversations. Asking if someone is autistic, however, was probably what you were aiming for. And pointless. Autism is a range, like skin colors, tempers, and artistic or musical talent. Some autistic people are super blessed in some (or many) intellectual fields. Some receive no bonuses to balance the drawbacks.

Fun fight scenes, building suspense by not having any of the main characters facing/ defeating their main nemesis. "...deadline attacked..." to wage war upon the deadline. "deadline attached..." has the deadline connected to. Enjoying the story very much! May 29, 2024

Loving the progression. I assume by the time he's at a "level 2 mana core level," he'll need to move on to level three mana beasts. "...to see them..." "...to sell them..." May 29, 2024

My apologies, then. There are similarities between your writing style and that of ESL writers whose work I've read. Nothing but respect for people who can manage to write understandably in a different language, I assure you. Do you want my editing comments? I don't mind re-reading your work either way, and I am willing to help you out in this way if you want. I didn't comment on most things I spotted, as I'm enjoying the ride. May 28, 2024

Can't wait to see the true quality of Nathan's team...! May 28, 2024

Just unlocked all current remaining chapters, up to 220 available so far! When referring to eyes, calling them 'dull' suggests that person is feeling depressed/ hopeless... or they are dead/dead inside/lifeless. I believe 'opaque' would be a far more accurate descriptor. When describing eyes, 'opaque' means 'hard to read.' Looking forward to finishing up to current chapters later today!

'anyway' is dismissive. What fits better would be, 'in any way,' with a space between the two. This brings attention TO your point, rather than suggesting it isn't important. Very impressed with your use of English, as it isn't your first language. However, if you'd rather I stopped helping with your English, I will stop. Not sure how to find comment replies here, so I'll try checking back here directly until I figure it out. And the story is very interesting to me. Looking forward to where you're taking us!

"Casted" should be "cast." Very much enjoying your work! May 25, 2024

Rich! He's rich again!

"Pros and benefits" are the same thing. "Pros and cons" is more likely what you meant. Pros are benefits, cons are drawbacks/ costs/ penalties of an action. Thank you for a very fun read! This is my third day, so I haven't caught up yet, just half way through. May 25, 2024

Mogar occasionally steps up and makes its wishes known. Including to stop hunting Vastor and Thrud, for inspiring new growth/ innovations. Tyris and all other guardians have been forbidden to act against those two. Lith, on the other hand, has not yet been... hmm... summoned/ called/ forced into taking up his guardian duties. I may be wrong, it does happen, but I believe Mogar isn't insisting he do anything because the things Mogar wants him to handle are barreling towards Lith without Mogar needing to poke Lith, too. If anything, Mogar appears to be giving very subtle nudges to aid Lith in being ready for those tasks it has lined up.

...round 3, but who's counting? 1) With Balkor 2) Defending a city with that cube artifact 3) ...now...

See, I'm wondering why Protector doesn't remember the no-baby-making spell. Nana gave it to Lith when he left for the Academy... the first time.

Lith has been maturing, but he also stands to gain, should Manohar manage to solve the riddles he and Balkor have pulled him in to consult with them: his lost life essence.

Ajatar wiped the floor with Glemos TWICE, the second time making sure that there won't be need for a third go round...

Lith: has a registered and profitable silver mine...

"...if I killed all the nobles who annoyed me, I'd have been called the new Balkor for years..."

Since it hasn't been laid out I cannot swear to it, but I believe Lith is an honorary member of the Association by default. Or rather, I vaguely recall him discussing with Tista how he needed to be an assistant professor for two years, yet she did [much lesser works] for the same reward, was the Association that desperate? (yes) For any wanting to read this point, it's right after he is blackmailed into helping in that first encounter with Thrud. Chapter title might be 'The Dragon's Egg,' as Tista was referred to as such regarding forcing Lith into action.

Well THAT wasn't possible EVER, unless he wanted to lose the love and trust of at least his mom and dad, possibly the oldest sister and twin of Orpal. Those three still love that waste of skin, blood, and bones.