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This fanfic is weird as fuck... Can you write cohesively and coherently?... and what the fuck is this Sebastian bullshit.. some kind of western butler?.

What a fucking hot mess... Everything about this fanfic is pure shite... The plot, the characters, the power level, the pace, I mean everything.... Like the fuck.. I think the author should stop writing.. all of your Fan fictions flopping suck and an insult to the originals.

Also this is a harem fanfic so put the fucking tag ....

The story is good.. I just don't like that Uchiha cunt ... That arrogant little bitch is unbearable.... She is probably the MC's tsundere love interest...

This is one of the most self insert fanfic bullshit I've ever read. The author is retarded when it comes to writing women's s characters, this idiot also casually made Tsunade into a pedo which is disrespectful. Author I suggest you to talk to a real woman and get out of your mother's basement once in a while ..