Rewrite: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1046851/i-am-ironman/

P.S. Sorry if I've come off a little harsh. I just love debating stuff like this.

While i see your point in that this is how most people would react, Rhodey and Tony are long friends, and look at how tony reacted in the movies. It was pretty much as of nothing had happened. Rhodey knows who tony is well.

Eh, forgot that. You do realise that surgeons are able to operate outside of their choosen field right. My aunts a Cardiologist yet, she still does tons of other kinds of surgeries since she is legally required to do a certain amount of non-private medical service. Why wouldn't tony want someone who has the plot armor of never failing a surgery to do it.

Umm in age of ultron, Ultron asks Jarvis why do you call him sir?

Firstly, shield was involved in the movie, Second, again, all that data was on his computer, unencrypted in the movie.

Parking violations are generally not seen as illicit activity in the same way jay walking or littering would be. You get a fine. If you pay the fine or get it dismissed it means nothing. It only becomes illegal if you don't pay.

He was selling weapons to terrorists in exchange for money, therefore a contract. Also where exactly in the MCU does it state Stane is doing this. My methodology when planning the plot for this was the fact that, if i get anything from the films or tv shows wrong i will correct that, otherwise i will just extrapolate to the best of my abilities. If you could link where it says anything about this i would be grateful since it might be something i have missed.

I'm just going to ignore this one.

When i say americans, i mean american soldiers.

Yep. Sorry, I'm not that well verse in American politics. I'll go back and fix that if i ever do a rewrite.

Unfortunately No. I just publish as i manage to write them.

Watched it a few days ago.

Thxs

Fixed IT

Sorry, my mistake. Langley is the headquarters for the CIA not FBI.

I don't know what you mean by heroine but pepper will be the only love interest since i am kind of bad at writing those. This is also only my first fiction and i will probably do a harem one eventually since they are hard to make compelling.

I wouldn't have our character do something that he couldn't actually do and I'm pretty sure that he could buy a few servers in a day or two when in Age of Ultron he could buy a whole building in Joburg to smash the hulk. And it not like he just built them, thousands of companies use some of the thousands of bunkers built by the Swiss during the cold war as server farms since their so well protected.

Maybe but that's a long way away.

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