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Chilling_Immortal

Chilling_Immortal

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I'm a rookie writer, all critism appreciated

2023-08-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    yes

    Ch 1 Important Announcement.
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    New Life : I Can Simulate Reincarnation.
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    depends on what I think of, but probably no

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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to sorafin

    itss chilling_immortal on dc

    Ch 2 Chapter 1 "Introduction"
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Posted

    I'm currently in the 100's of the novel chapters and overall, it's good the only thing that I don't quite like is the fact that the Mc took the martial artist class because its only limit depends on the cultivation technique, but later its said that lords have no upper limit, meaning that he could've chose any class.

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    Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Raphis

    I'm sorry I'm not done with reading your novel yet, I don't have much time to myself recently so it might take a few days, if you want you can delete this review and repost it after I'm done with your review

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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Raphis

    thx, I'm not done reading your novel yet so my review will be in a few hours

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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Raphis

    sure

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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Posted

    I didn't start reading this yet due to the fact that in the tags, you mentioned bestiality, could someone who already read the novel, explain to me if it's literal beastiality or wolf turned into a girl type beat.

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    The tower of Heaven: Lust and destruction
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Daoist92VPav

    I can't help, but ask, do the conversations in the novel feel real, because whenever I reread the chapters to spellcheck myself, I can't help, but feel that they seem robotic.

    Ch 11 Chapter 10 "12 intense hours, Break through"
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Daoist92VPav

    I am really thankful for you critism.

    Ch 10 Chapter 9 "Speed vs potential, love"
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to V_king

    Is the thumbnail for the novel ai generated? If yes, could you say what site is it? I recently started my own novel and wanted a thumbnail of this sort

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    When I woke up as an Incubus
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Daoist92VPav

    yeah I realized that after rereading to spell check

    Ch 7 Chapter 6 "Virgin in a brothel, Blue balling a bastard"
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to Werebare

    It can't be worse than Global Killing right?

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    Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal6mth
    Replied to t3ksp3c

    I haven't read this yet, but it can't be worse than Global:Killing right?

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    Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal9mth
    Replied to ChaosRain2582

    there was a timesjip after he took his brother as a disciple so i guess he broke throuugh during the timeskip

    Over the years, Qin Chen had successfully reached Path-seeking and Bahung Real.
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  • Chilling_Immortal
    Chilling_Immortal9mth
    Commented

    "Chu Kuangren wants to know your location"

    [Congratulations, you have successfully checked in. You have received the Human King Seal.]
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