thanks you... I missed that 😔

Thank you

thank you so much :3

thank you i will try!

This is a really good concept, right off the bat it gives and air of mystery but i recommend reviewing your chapters a little more. I noticed a number of punctuation and formatting errors for example, everything a character says something (dialogue) you should have it start on a new line. same goes for thoughts they should be on their own new line. If you want further help/guidance I can gladly give pointers just let me know! (Part of a review swap)

Great prologue mentioning the Greek mythology accurately, Then the twist woah! Your chapters really pulled me in, I will defo be reading more! (Part of a review swap)

Great story. It really reminds me of the old stories i used to like to read, i think i will keep this one on my reading list! your story development and background development is great - i like how the 'stats' update with each completed action. keep going!

First few chapters really pull you in! I enjoyed reading the first three chapters and i think i will keep this on my reading list. I love the introduction to the family and how its a 'story' being told. great work!

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Who doesnt like being treated like a princess deep down

Ahem... thats for me to know and you to find out

oh yes for the filthy ones!

Hey bagpuss! thanks for the tip! I will take a look haha!

Very much so 🥸

thank you 🥰

You have a great story here. There are a couple of mistakes in the writing, but it is still smooth and readable. I like the development and pace from the beginning and the development between MCs Well done Author, Keep up the great work! (Part of Review Swap!)

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Excellent quality of writing. It is so nice to read something without errors! Your story is paced well and you have a great idea. I will for sure keep reading, this is a great story! (Part of review swap)