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Shichibukai14

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  • Shichibukai14
    Shichibukai148mth
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    Muyan is so Funny😂

    Ch 17 Sweet Love and Teasing
    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
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  • Shichibukai14
    Shichibukai148mth
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    Wow! I'm so happy for them😊 I was supposed to be sad, but when Muyan accepted him back again, I was just smiling all throughout.

    Ch 16 A Promise Sealed with a Ring
    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
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  • Shichibukai14
    Shichibukai148mth
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    I feel so bad for Yutu🥺

    Ch 15 Failed Kiss Attempt
    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
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  • Shichibukai14
    Shichibukai148mth
    Posted

    I like the writing quality, but there's something missing on the story development, but it's okay! There's still room for improvement. The character design is okay, but it's too common for me because I've seen or read a lot of movies or books that has similarities to your novel. The updating stability is pretty good for me, but sometimes you miss a day. And lastly the world background is still common for me, but I do like your style and still there's something missing to it, and I'm sure you can still improve. Overall, so far so good, but needs improvement. Keep up the good work. You have received a new reader.

    Cosmic Binding
    Fantasy · Peterson_89
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  • Shichibukai14
    Shichibukai148mth
    Posted

    I love it! I've read up to 8 chapters non-stop and so far I really loved it. I'm sleepy now, so I'll continue reading tomorrow. Keep up the good work.

    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
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