Why does it say he broke the Raikages arm didn’t he blast it off in the last chapter leaving him with only one arm left?

I think it makes sense for the distance to grow as because of his parents being in anbu he see’s them for what a few days of the year and the fact his sister being in charge of him. Now I get his sisters intention of being cool and teaching the mc but she is a child and the main character is has the mind of a grown man which let’s be honest pretending to be far behind weak and immature would not be sustainable a person would get tired and be themselves so because he acts like himself it doesn’t match up with what his family expects of him and that expectation they have of him when they don’t ever really see him just makes more of a disconnect between them. He can comprehend that they feel frustrated but how else can he react his family are strangers to him and he pretty much lives on his own with his sister joining the anbu besides the whole mentoring his sister tried to do would fail regardless because if he didn’t have the template system and had to grow naturally he would be unprepared for war because it’s not like his sister could have given him enough time to make a difference. Honestly though in the main characters position he did the best and it’s not like he is trying to be mean his family just assumes that he is arrogant and looks down on them and jump to conclusions. A family that has always been going off on mission’s versus friends he made at school and were a consistent and positive presence in his life would make him feel closer to them than an absent family. I would probably just move out if I were him as his family chose to throw him to the wolves and put their honor as shinobi above their family just like they have been doing his whole life choosing to stay in anbu. If he weren’t a reincarnated person Kazuki would resent his family and be deeply angered by them as they didn’t commit to being a family but rather remained committed to their ninja careers.

Also to add on it has him progress his character, as a Jedi, and his strength in the force as he would have to face Karness Muur. This situation gives both a love interest and antagonist that focuses on Gavin specifically so he doesn’t have moments where he just waits for the major plot points in the main Star Wars story to happen.

Celeste Morne she is a Jedi Gavin stumbles upon and frees her and is able to connect with her when speaking about the force but it also brings drama because she is stuck with the Muur talisman Gavin is put in a difficult position as this love is also the host to an ancient and dangerous with lord. It will give Gavin some more to do other than preparing a safe haven for the Jedi once order 66 is issued as he has both someone he must save and a powerful enemy he can struggle to defeat you can even have an instance where Gavin calls one of his friends for help as a way to pay it forward because he is always helping it can create an interesting adventure for your story and you can play around with how long it takes for Gavin to save Celeste. Obi wan and Anakin could be the ones to help out as both have had romance play a big part in their lives and it could influence their futures.

I just wanna say after reading this whole story I love how you have kept this story interesting it feels like everything Gavin does matters and while not apart of every major event in the clone wars when he gets involved his reasons are for when his friends are in need. Further on the topic of his friends his relationships with the characters we know are very interesting to see play out he wants the best for them but he will not manipulate them or helicopter parent them and I feel like he can have more of an impact on them as even though he is not always there he answers their call for help so they know they can trust him. I also love that when he was making his wishes he chose to have starkillers force potential instead of just having the most potential possible he still is a powerhouse of course which I like as it allows for him to be able to turn the tide but I like how he puts a lot of effort in his training and it excites me thinking of when we will see it bear fruit. Out of all the reincarnations into the Star Wars universe I like this the most because it is so different and also bold as to include elements from both canon and legends it creates a mystery as to how it will all play out it gives ideas of where the story will go but leaves a mystery as it could all turn out in a multitude of ways leaving me wondering. All in all you have done quite a good job with your story and it helped me remember the love I have for this franchise thanks for hard work.

Jon went from scorpion to sub zero hopefully he gets could at using it.