I’d take the map. Or otherwise i’d feel like im always being spied on.

After Harry Potter becomes the Master of Death. All stories become wish fullfillment.

This story was well put together. I found it engaging and humorous. Although i probably enjoyed the author comments expressing their exasperation about how sex crazed their audience was. I did ultimately lose my interest in the story after the main character achieved equilibrium with his warring ‘other’ halves. He became a little to ‘OP’ imo. It kinda stopped the story being enjoyable. Also his werebear form being 4.6m tall was kinda silly, like charging into the enemy knocking them over like bowling pins. Hes not shoulder checking those 1.8m tall vampires no hes turkey slapping them. Anyways it was amusing.

Trying to read this made my brain bleed out of my brain bleed. The start of the first chapter seemed fine. But grammar, sentence structure and spelling went out the window. Random words added to sentences just to keep you on your toes. My only guess is this was a story written in another language machine translated to english. Which makes no sense because the author notes seem to be well structured and spell checked.

Not a huge fan of this time travel arc. But i am really enjoying your book.