0Hanyue
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0Hanyue3mthReplied to ali_atgCh 531 First Phase: Third Stage- 0Hanyue3mthCommented
immunity
'I guess she wasn't lying about the mental impunity. Furthermore, this also means Nyx is far stronger than the fighting giant spirit.' Jacob mused, and he was pleased with this development. - 0Hanyue6mthCommented
like a bottomless abyss
A pitch-black corridor appeared, which looked bottomless abyss. - 0Hanyue6mthCommented
extended
Jacob extant his hand, which was slightly trembling from anxiety and fear at the same time. - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
Blink
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Heart essence
"This is only the result of a twenty percent transformation, and as I inject heart blood, the transformation will continue. Doesn't this mean I can become strong just by eating and sleeping?" - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
Long
He couldn't help but touch the silky threads. "My hair has grown so big?" - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
“as he is”
'Should I wait for him to awake, or should I just test him as is it?' Decker mulled over this choice. - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
“gown”
Decker quickly changed into a new green outfit that looked like a grown, and after sorting out all the things he had collected and bought from his eight-month journey, he sat on a wooden chair comfortably. - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
“It was still hope that kept him going” man I understand making a few mistakes but if you are not able to write one right sentence you should not write a novel. I am not saying that you should give up but to get better first and then write. Because the story and mc are really nice but it ruins the story flow. Might sound harsh but is only meant with good intentions.
He could not rest if he didn't see the result of his theory, which was also the only hope of leaving this place alive. Even if this hope was based on his delusion, it was still hoped that kept him going. - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
„but think…“
Jacob naturally noticed the change in green liquid and started to feel dread when he thought about the possibilities after this green liquid completely lost its effects. He couldn't help but thought that he would die of hunger or drowning. - 0Hanyue8mthCommented
has
'Well, it doesn't matter anymore since this helps me, and I must reevaluate my views about this mysterious world. I can't use my common sense from my previous world here. This place probably had magic as well, which is like a myth in my previous world,' Jacob passively mused. - 0Hanyue9mthCommented
„wants me dead“
'This bastard definitely wanted me dead!' Jacob really thought he was dead this time around. - 0Hanyue9mthCommented
„as long as he lives…“
'So, why did he pretend to be unconscious before? Instinct or fear toward me? Whatever, as long as he lived through the third implantation!' - 0Hanyue9mthCommentedCh 20 Christian Grey