Need more chapters asap! Love BL! Hurry up author

Hood novel, but please add a blurb for your novl, or Synopsys.

Yes, you are the author :D

The title was pulling me in, bro! Nice choice.

Mishameans Mother, right? OMG! I guessed you read Game Of Thrones!

So now we follow the elf girl? Nice!

I gave it an Academy tag if you plan on an Academy novel. But it's yours to decide.

You should add more exposition before jumping on time so no one gets confused.

Nice job Alice!

Like you? But you are the woman. Jajajaja

Wow, you created this lore from Erutan music? That amazing! I love listening to her music, and it is so calm. Now, let's hope the man was not the villain. I would cry if he became the bad guy.

Good opening. It gave me the vibe of Dune. It intrigued me, seriously. But, it is more about the Elf girl.Perhaps the next chapter would be focussed on Varis? Keep the spirit up!

It was a good novel for killing time; I can't wait for what is next on Gatcha!

I would read it after you add chaoters 50. So, I kept it on my bookself before I read it. Goodluck

So far, so good; the plot was on, but too early to say anything. Good luck!

First! Well, good luck, author, on your writing journey!