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Timothy_Odhiambo

Timothy_Odhiambo

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2023-07-14 JoinedKenya
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Replied to NIHILA

    I am glad you liked my work, please do feel free to share my work.[img=exp]

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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Replied to Marconegrao7

    thanks for the review, please feel free to share my work.

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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Posted

    This is a great story that explores the theme of love and obsession like no other, but from the beginning as it cooks slowly perhaps for the author's plan to develop his characters all round

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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    great story, I have enjoyed it.

    Ch 1 Dreams Of A Magus' Life
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    Return of the Strongest Forbidden Magus
    Fantasy · Cloud_Daoist
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    nice opening

    Ch 1 Dreams Of A Magus' Life
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    Return of the Strongest Forbidden Magus
    Fantasy · Cloud_Daoist
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    great continuation. keep it up.

    Ch 1 FlashBack
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    Predators Reign
    Fantasy · NamanKumar
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    This no, don't tell just show what is happening.

    "ZZZzzz...Huh? Oh, yeah. What happened next?" Soul jerked awake suddenly.
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    Predators Reign
    Fantasy · NamanKumar
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    the start is great, I envy your talent.

    Ch 1 Nexus of Ascendance
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    Chimerical World System
    Fantasy · Han_Sirang
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo7mth
    Commented

    I really like the opening.

    In a small village, life bustled with the energy of both people and animals. The autumn weather had brought in clouds that obscured the sun, and a recent rain had left the village streets muddy and treacherous.
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    Vampire Headsman
    Fantasy · NIHILA
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Commented

    Just like the way the story opens, [img=coins]let me find the mc first

    Ch 1 An Interesting Turn Of Events
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    War On Man
    Fantasy · LanumKing
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Replied to whispers_timmy

    will address that, thank you.

    Ch 1 The Ride.
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    STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
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