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Latr3hReplied to KjotorCh 9 Ch. 9: Just a kid- Latr7dPosted
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DC-17 is great, it's cool and versatile. But it's an officer weapon, by my understanding, Dageer isn't only still a squad leader (making him a sergeant I guess) but he hasn't even received an ARC or ARF designations
Dageer checked the weapon he brought, a DC-17. He had grown fond of it after Commander Keeli showed all of its uses to him. Besides, his DC-15A was too cumbersome and big to use underwater. - Latr7dCommented
Well, seeing as how different the things are going, I guess Cutup won't die? 🧐
"CT-4040 right? Forget that numbers. Let me think... what about... uhmm... Cutup! Yeah, Cutup is good. Don't forget to tell our brothers what I said to you. We are living beings, not machines. Never forget that." - Latr8dCommented
The writer types 'AAT' correctly, but types 'Laat' instead of 'LAAT' consistantly 🧐
Suddenly an Laat flew above them at neckbreaking speed. The Laat fired all its missiles at the tower were the LR1K was. The over 30 meters tall tower was instantly reduced to rubble. A cloud of dust rose, and CT-4063 couldn't see a thing. - Latr15dCommented
I am planning to base very skill on a skyrim spell type scale, meaning: 1. Novice level (beginner) 2. Apprentice level (learner) 3. Adept level (confident) 4. Expert level (well-versed) 5. Master level (nothing left to learn, only to develop the skill further by themselves)
"I am Volfir, I am an apprentice level hunter, I can cook and I know some herbs" a few minutes later it was the teen who introduced himself to the group, making his skills known in order to be properly assigned tasks - Latr15dCommented"Hmm... the name's Aela and if you wish to hunt with me, your feet need to be quick and your eyes quicker" she said, Volfir felt like wanted to talk with her more, but his attention was grabbed by more people introducing themselves to him
- Latr15dCommented"And I am Farkas, Aela and Vilkas may make fun of me in the future, but you shouldn't take it to mind, they are good people" introduced himself a young man who looked almost like a copy of Vilkas, just a bit bigger and with shoulder-length hair
- Latr15dCommented"We get to Riverwood by morning of the next day, rest there until the sun is high and then move towards the North Skybound Watch, I am Vilkas by the way, you should do well to remember that" started explaining the young suave man, who coincidentally happened to be right next to Njada, who stayed silent, as the group started moving towards the Whiterun stables outside the city's walls
- Latr15dCommented"Why should I let this milk drinker ride with me?" disagreed the Nord female
- Latr15dCommentedThe sun was setting off in the horizon, it was a while back when it passed behind the Dragonsreach, so according to the Harbinger's words, Volfir was waiting near the second gates, watching the city's smith by the name of Adrianne Avenicci do her work
- Latr15dCommented"He shouldn't bugger off Arnbjorn, nor is he in the wrong place Skjor, can't you two see the notice in his hand?" chimed in the third man with a calm and authoritative voice, fitted in the same armour as Skjor, he stood firmly in place, towering over the others with his bulky figure. Although formidable, the Nord was showing signs of aging, his blonde hair turning over a shade of grey
- Latr15dCommented"Although I do not agree with the choice of words" started off another middle-aged Nord "but you seem to be in the wrong place", this one however was blind in his left eye, while a patch of short hair was starting to recede oh his head. He was clean shaven, perhaps a sign of his service-related habits, just like the proud and straight gait he had while showing off his heavy, wolf ornamented armour
- Latr15dCommented
Decided to make it so Arnbjorn is still in the Companions at this point in time (he is asked to leave at an unidentified time in canon, so...)
"What do you want tidbit, bugger off" spoke up a mean looking middle-aged Nord, his shoulder lengthened hair as white as snow, just like his well kept beard. The man was wearing well fitted leather armour that was lined with fur, a necessity in the cold environment of Skyrim - Latr15dCommented"Muuu" while the young man started sulking, he was still the first one to jump up to Volfir and grab his arm in a handshake, while radiating an aura full of happiness, then came the rest and after a few more minutes of farewells, Volfir found himself standing behind the huge wooden gates, leading into the city, as he watched the group of men walk off into the distance in two columns, one riding their horses, the other doing so on foot.
- Latr19dCommented
Now that I have properly read through the chapter on a clear head, all I can say is, sorry. This one feels really rough, some repetition, bad word choice and spelling mistakes. I was writing this chapter while having my mind occupied with work and college at the same time, over the span of multiple days, so I'll try not to do that again
Ch 6 Ch. 6: Exploring