The MC hide his strength for made up resone for very looooooooong time he even left someone close to him to die for no reason all he had to is to lock this person for some time until the threat is gone no fighting or anything just hide this person for some time maybe a day or two nothing more but noooo this person must die before the MC is pathetic coward

Yet another novel ruined by the author/viewer porn addiction seriously a sexual relationship between the MC and his fiancee mother?!!! Just why ?!! it completely ruined the whole MC character alone with the novel , - it was supposed to be a novel about stranger in strange land poor kid trying to befriend the original character from the novel he loved, Enjoying his time while fully aware that this is not his body and will give if back soon, - I like that part very much yet you successfully ruined it was as if you re-write the whole novel tweak some settings to make her story so important to the plot she clearly wasn’t meant to be anything aside from background character yet you change that now، - her existence destroys everything the MC just so Obsessed with her and she into it punching him to be obsessed with her even more, - she’s you fiancee mother first you care taker second yet no one to speak about them as if nothing had happened except for the finance of course poor girl what are you going to do if the author/viewers were into this shit? Nothing you will always be the villain yet you will be the hero in my eyes this novel is beyond saving it this point

Keep going make the chapters as long as possible

A wonderful novel, but please be realistic. How can a monster with an uncommon class survive being chased by people much stronger than her for a very long time? Just make her evolve into a rare class immediately and please do not do that again. - I mean by that, there is a little period between her evolve in the novel from the perspective of the characters, but from Readers' perspective: It took 800 chapters and we have not seen her evolve to Rare class yet, and this just rare class imagine something beyond Rare ? It will be nightmare. it this point we will not see her evolve even after 3000 chapters at your current pace, and this is not good. She were supposed to reach that rare class in the festival and fight everyone with her new strength, even if she lose, I do not care I just wanted to see her strength after she evolved to Rare class , but you stupidly end the Festival before she evolved to rare without any reason to do so despite you hint for it : - tell me what is the point of making her evolution available before level 40 in Fox Festival if she didn’t evolved to rare even after reaching level 39 ? You made me excited over nothing. F*** you all of the excitement for fox festival acr was for nothing in the end what waste of chapters

A system ?? Why the f*** do you need a system ? Isn’t enough that you steal the other hard work ? no you have to give the ‘side character’ a system with shop !!! That Pathetic drop

Thanks for the chapter, I hope their is more chapter today....

Thanks for the chapter

Good keep it

Thanks for the chapter !! 🤗

Keep going please don’t drop it....

It’s been so long sense I read well written novel everything in this novel is perfect no cliche involved straightforward no edge lord, I hope the MC developed or have romantic failing for the heroine not just saving her, right now it’s not clear if he love her or not I hope he dose....

Great novel pleeeeeeeeae don’t drop it I’m enjoying it!!!!

Nothing happened in this chapter other then him sitting on his sit calling it ‘chapter’ is disrespectful he just chitchat about something he already said in the in first chapters just the author way to do 1K without actually doing it, clearly one short-chapter per day wasn’t enough he had to pause the story to do some useless monologue 😤...

What is the point of your novel if it just clone of the novel extra ? You only made your MC weak marksman with the ablity to shot faster in shorts amounts of time only for him to be like Kim, he was too slow to catch his team for some reason like Kim !! not only that you made a single monster multiple to 1000 or more mini bee when he arrived because that how Kim did it and the worst part after this chapter end, you reveal that one of the female character in novel have one of her family members going berserk because of demon conspiracy !! , now the MC have to kill him before it’s too late !! Sound like something Kim did I wonder why ?

Believe me I want to enjoy every word of this novel but he keeps preventing me from doing so his wired actions like repeating previous sentence from the last chapter and now he add chapter numbers that the webnovel already counting automatically see the title above👆🏻 ? it say 41 Nadia’s mindset... dose he have to tell me twice ?

Is this necessary ? You wasting so much words by adding unnecessary words or thing that already exist in the previous chapter...

This is bad news for us you upload one chapter per day this is slow but your chapter had advantage they were -Strafward -long -a lot of thing happened in one chapter, Now they start to become short not only that nothing happened in this chapter he just meet her in the end of it the rest is you just wasting it with pointless monologue on purpose, I don’t like that...

Wait why you saying it like you aren’t the author ? Do you translate this novel to English ?

I love it !!! Keeep going don’t stop and please change the cover of this novel to something more applying

He simply deactivated has eyes it consumes too much mana