mordant gives me orochimaru vibes 🤣🤣🤣🤣 like we start off not liking him and because the man can cheat death like it's a game that he's professional at, it just seems like his presence will be more and more useful over time. even tho we all know that this guy is a problem

these 2 chapters was literally 🔥

I think he read some of these stories on this app along with the reviews and decided that shadow slave won't have no flaws that will have the people reading it questioning him on his writing skills

finally! this loop was like a hundred chapters long!

after calming down this story still better than a lot of others, but that rushed ending is the reason I gave a low score last time.

this is solid proof of why you can't play with women's feelings. because they will immediately become murderous

fiend is about to be his new powerhouse

that's cool. I just want the couples to max out their cores before becoming a Saint. if that happens they won't have to worry about collecting shadow fragments and should shards. they can just collect echos and memories and sunny can turn echos into shadows and still be maxed out on cores. and then they can just share the shards they obtain with their friends so the whole squad standing strong and confident

all I gotta say is before this nightmare ends they need to kill a few thousand of them river locust. it would be lit that they unlock all their soul cores before they become transcended

imma finish the novel tho because most of it is on youtube and I don't have to spend money on the story.

I'm almost 1300 chapters in and the character gets stronger but that's it. he really doesn't change. he saves people but but not because he wants to its because he's constantly stuck in a predicament. I'm waiting for the character development but it's still lacking.

this story is all over the place. it's good but way too many stupid side missions and stupid decisions being made with the protagonist and his team.

*now if*

that's the side effect of restoring old memories. she wasn't gonna remember anything before getting turned. that resulted in her becoming a useless unreliable character that needed to be dealt with or her stupid thoughts would keep bringing the team down

I would've ended it after answering all the unanswered questions he left in the story. and then he has 3 chapters after it ends and only 1 of those 3 chapter explained the origins of zero, the liar fortune teller, ancient devil and the leader of the demons race. han sens wife is still a child and the universe is still damaged. the story was left on a huge Clift hangers and on top of that we find out that the Golden growler's Golden door is a door that leads to the multiverse

the ending makes me feel like I wasted my money reading this. I loved this webnovel up until the last 10 chapters

ayo baoer is devious 🤣

it's very pathetic that it takes 3 chapters to explain how sad the mc is before he learns a new skill. and I know the author don't read these comments nor does he care about our opinions but I'm not paying for stretched out explanations that could've been summarized. these unfortunately loses some points for me

shout outs for the dragonball reference to the saiyan race

he should have picked up that diamond skin geno art back in the first god sanctuary only because I think he could've fused it with jadeskin