DaoistGreenOnion
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Hehe, thank you, well, it's not really that scrubby in terms of power but I don't like to drag out fights in general, and you will see how the reason is explained for this fight being short in the next chap I can't say that there will never be a long fight as I don't know that yet, but I can't imagine why I would write that other than if there is something interesting to introduce through that way of portraying the fight. Thank you for reading!
LOL, those extra exclamations marks really drive the point home hahaha But yeah, I get it, I also did not want to leave you all on this note ^.^" While we're at it, I hope you're feeling much better and are either already completely well or on your way to fast recovery Thank you for reading!
lol, no, I meant "her..." as in "her man" hehe
Hehe, yeah
Hmm, he has already spent all of the Innate Yin of members of the Frozen Garden Palace, he simply did not use it at the moment of taking it, using it sparingly at the moment of each breakthrough from the gate of the Realm to the 9th level. Thank you for reading!
Oh, shoot, that's super serious dude That's 40 C!!! Hope you're doing well man, wish you swift recovery Also, I completely misunderstood your comment, only now understanding what you meant I thought you were talking about the novel -_-" Anyway, hope you get better soon and wish you well And thank you for reading as always!
Not peak, but at Core Reformation
It was Ye Ling
Thank you for the suggestion, it honestly sounds better, so I might use your version as is hahaha There are a lot of parts I would have written differently to be honest all over the novel, including this part, but I don't want to slow down the upload speed too much, I also cannot do it pragmatically speaking as I need to at least cover part of monthly expenses, and with a slower writing speed I will not have enough for that -_-" Also, comments disappear after editing a paragraph, which is why I am usually reluctant to edit them, so your credit for editing will be gone with it -_-" But thank you very much for the suggestion, it does make more sense to rewrite it that way And thank you for reading!
lol, well idk about that now, haven't considered it to be honest, at least yet maybe if they have a bit more character progressions in the far future Thank you for reading! PS: Also, would really appreciate a reply on one of the previous comments of yours, I didn't quite understand what you meant about the going to 104.5 temperature and stuff and its giving me slight anxiety ^.^" hehe