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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Alex also has a good idea of how to conquer Zubat. According to his understanding of bats, Zubat is very afraid of the light. As long as I grasp the weakness of Zubat, the difficulty of conquering Zubat is not very difficult.
    Pokemon: Master of tactics
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Problem for all Wuxia protagonists: Interpreting the right answer.

    "The motherfukers robbed me again, and the police didn't do anything about it. No matter which world you live in, your future will always be in the hands of others if you are so weak. If you want to control your destiny, you must have the power in your hand first."
    Pokemon: Master of tactics
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to GodOfLight

    You can’t just give a review like that dude. You got a problem with something about the fic then elaborate. Telling people he’s stupid doesn’t tell the audience anything. Give us some decisions that he made that support your conclusion. Basics of peer review/ being a respectful audience member.

    The Apex (A Marvel Fan-Fic)
    Book&Literature · Baph0met
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to Barcas

    TM system seems like an easy way to bypass 4 move rule. Work with your primary 4 constantly, and repeatedly install a specific move with a TM when the memory starts to degrade. Seems like something rich people would do. Pay to win trainers.

    Renegade Jenny (Pokemon Fanfic)
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Shinkai release command: Judge all things in this universe, Zanryuzuki!
    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Does he control the cup or the water… The world may never know.

    "I know that's why you will enter the wheel of fortune! You will get three random powers! Isn't that great... I mean you can technically get something useless... like the power to control a cup of water, but you can also get the really good stuff," God chuckled.
    Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    God:

    "Well, I might have a accidentally dropped a shark close to you... and I might have noticed that a tad late?" God offered, clearly embarrassed.
    Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    The author hasn’t planned for long-term quality. Issues I have with your fanfic: -Skills are not properly defined. You haven’t explicitly stated what each skill effects. -You haven’t portrayed the way those skills have affected him very well. For example, when you get very skilled at something the way your mind organizes information changes. The MC’s mental processes don’t change at all. -You haven’t portrayed him having multiple high level skills very well. These skills only seem to come up when they are relevant to the plot, and not when they are passively relevant. They aren’t active skills you use whenever they become relevant. They are a part of him. Examples being: A sculptor must have great hand-eye coordination; as well as a great sense of cause and effect in order to make sure that what they create matches well with what was envisioned, a high level martial artists sense of balance is much higher than the average persons; so much so, that they often seem graceful, a polyglot often makes connections between information faster, an artist that is competent in realism must have an eye for dimensions/measurements, a musician has a great sense of rythm and mood that can translate to just about any social skill. He has 3 of these five skills, and none of them are shown or commented upon once. -Finally, I don’t see how what’s-his-name attempting to save Makima will throw her off his scent. That is still not what an average 4 year old will do, and it’s certainly not in character for his previous incarnation either.

    Ch 12 Turning Enemies into Allies
    MHA: A Talented Hero
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    It says it on the screen… What is this guy doing?!?! Quirk 1: Talent Redistribution. It is right there!

    'What's the deal with my quirks? Weren't people supposed to have only one? From this body's teachers brief explanation about quirks and looking carefully. The kids around me only have one quirk or so it looks, and what's up with this floating panel? It kinda looks like one of those systems but according to what's written it's most probably a quirk, is it even possible to have such a quirk?'
    MHA: A Talented Hero
    Anime & Comics · Sr_Extremis
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to Chaddts

    That is true. Preferences are something people have, and are nothing to be ashamed of. What’s his name is of the belief that having stories about isekai with the protagonist being female is, ”the way to kill isekai.” Is that not discrimination based upon gender. It would have been fine if he said something along the lines of, “Yo, homies, I don’t really like this fic, cause the author isn’t making the FL super interesting. I’m dipping.” Or even just said something about the protagonist not being his cup of tea. Instead he made a blanket statement with no room left for interpretation that women protagonists when played in the isekai genre ruin every novel they are a part of. If that is not discrimination, I don’t know what is.

    Reborn After A Death March
    Anime & Comics · Calamity95
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to STEVIOL_GLY

    He ensured freedom for his entire country while being the fall guy.

    However, it did not bother Eren to use them for minor requests. Eren was working on expanding his horizon. 
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    I think I see where this is going and I can’t wait to read about Dumbledor’s expression when he finally puts everything together. Whether the theory is bogus in this AU or not.

    It is to be informed that an unregistered heir of the house had made a withdrawal of 10,000 galleons from the Dumbledore trust vault, also taking the heir ring with him, which was later recovered from Knockturn Alley in the pawn shop.
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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    However, it did not bother Eren to use them for minor requests. Eren was working on expanding his horizon. 
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Plains not planes

    Planes as far as one could see, a canal or two once in a while.
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    "And I thought your mother was a healer, Nymphadora, an average adult has not more than 5 litres of blood, the kid lost seven out of five."
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Erens balance:

    "Agh-" The vision was going hazy and the balance was ashtray, what was left of it anyways.
    Harry Potter : Vengeance [Dropped]
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Also, who is this and what has he done with Harry Potter? This was supposed to be a HP protagonist crossover. They don’t even have the same name anymore, and they most definitely have different demeanors. The potions excuse could have technically changed him into a completely different person, but I came to watch Harry Potter not someone who doesn’t: look like him, act like him, have the same beliefs that he does, or even has radically different powers. Now, don’t get me wrong I like the potential of the seven deadly sins thing you have going on, but something in this has got to be recognizable; otherwise you’re just using HP’s name to draw in views while you are making your own protagonist.

    He regretted that decision immediately since the ceiling of the house was already occupied by a huge colony of spiders. . . Sirius' killed them all with the help of Pride. Little fucks even crawled into the walls!
    The Prideful Wizard in MHA.
    Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to Pathetic_Uchiha

    Technically 11 years of experience, and knowledge on how the other 35 would have gone.

    He regretted that decision immediately since the ceiling of the house was already occupied by a huge colony of spiders. . . Sirius' killed them all with the help of Pride. Little fucks even crawled into the walls!
    The Prideful Wizard in MHA.
    Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    Replied to Rebel_Kid

    Is this a spoiler or a conjecture?

    "There will be great changes in three hundred years, Harry. Or there was. . . Time in this place makes no sense sometimes." She joked.
    The Prideful Wizard in MHA.
    Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
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  • DaoistpTXt65
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    These are the first words of the comment below(they got cut off for some reason): Voldemort was caught in the the blast as well. Is that relevant to not?

    "Right here." Jasmine put her hand on his chest. "When the magic wave destroyed all living things in the room, it also touched the Stone. As a result, it merged with your soul and is now a part of you. The good news is that it gave you a new power, but in return, it now feeds on your magic. Although in the future there won't even be any Wizards left, so you don't have to worry about having no spare magic."
    The Prideful Wizard in MHA.
    Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
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