Praise the Fool !

hey, I won't do a harem. However, the complicity that Edward has with Sylphie will not necessarily transform into a romance (they are still children), it is possible that Eris will take this role, for the moment these are the two possible characters for a romance.. however I don't yet know how the story will unfold, it's just an idea.

nice to see you again Hammer dog

the cover image, for the moment a childish version

Hello, it's the author here, shamelessly commenting on my own story :) The regular release schedule for chapters is usually 1 or 2 per week, but there may be exceptions. I hope you'll enjoy the story !

yes, I live in the south of France

I wrote it in French, thank you for noticing it

I will give a description of him in the next chapters

thanks for the corrections!

Honestly, I'm a beginner too, my advice should be considered more like that of a classmate rather than a real author. First of all, I'm like you, I really wanted to write books but I didn't really know how to start, so to practice and see if I really liked writing I decided to write several fanfictions to train my writing on an already existing framework. I think you could also start with a little Fanfic or a short story to practice. Then, it's rather basic but rereading after a few hours without having to think about the books allows you to correct and change a lot of things, especially at the beginning. And finally I try to always make my characters do an action during explanation scenes or dialogues. I don't know if these tips can help you but I hope so, it's been a month since I wrote almost every day for my two fanfics and I think I've really progressed so the best advice I can give you is to start writing directly.

Thanks for the corrections!!

I couldn't find his name so I made it up, anyway he shouldn't come back often in the story...But if you want I could change it later

Thank you very much for the message really!

maybe, however if there is romance there will be no harem and no relationship like in the original story... thanks for the message!

I'm sorry if you didn't enjoy the story! As for controlling his words, I see it more as a personality trait than a joke. throughout the story, Bakugo will have to face the consequences of his words... Even so, thank you for leaving a review

yes honestly the last two chapters don't make much sense in relation to bakugo's personality, I'll probably delete them to make a parallel story and rewrite from the previous chapter.

Yes, Edward will still have low mana reserves, but he will be able to use the battle aura, and maybe his weakness in pure magic will be compensated by something else...

Thank you for the comment and sorry for the grammar, to answer the question I think maybe doing romance but in the future.