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    Replied to Mysteries_

    Praise the Fool !

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    Replied to BenjaTier

    hey, I won't do a harem. However, the complicity that Edward has with Sylphie will not necessarily transform into a romance (they are still children), it is possible that Eris will take this role, for the moment these are the two possible characters for a romance.. however I don't yet know how the story will unfold, it's just an idea.

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    Replied to imagination1

    nice to see you again Hammer dog

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    Replied to LOL_BIGGY

    the cover image, for the moment a childish version

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    Posted

    Hello, it's the author here, shamelessly commenting on my own story :) The regular release schedule for chapters is usually 1 or 2 per week, but there may be exceptions. I hope you'll enjoy the story !

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    Replied to HolierThanThou515

    yes, I live in the south of France

    Réveillé par l'appel de son nom, Edward se réveilla grogui. Il se frotta calmement le crâne et bailla quelque seconde avant de se tourner lentement vers le propriétaire de la voix.
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    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    Replied to Dominic_Zibuda

    I wrote it in French, thank you for noticing it

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    Replied to Herohero

    I will give a description of him in the next chapters

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    Replied to Kurama24

    thanks for the corrections!

    The girl had her hand on her chin a thoughtful look, noticing the looks directed at her, she cleared her throat "Well, at the start of the fight he touched his ankles several times, I thought he was stretching but… it may be related to this technique…."
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    Replied to hammer_dog

    Honestly, I'm a beginner too, my advice should be considered more like that of a classmate rather than a real author. First of all, I'm like you, I really wanted to write books but I didn't really know how to start, so to practice and see if I really liked writing I decided to write several fanfictions to train my writing on an already existing framework. I think you could also start with a little Fanfic or a short story to practice. Then, it's rather basic but rereading after a few hours without having to think about the books allows you to correct and change a lot of things, especially at the beginning. And finally I try to always make my characters do an action during explanation scenes or dialogues. I don't know if these tips can help you but I hope so, it's been a month since I wrote almost every day for my two fanfics and I think I've really progressed so the best advice I can give you is to start writing directly.

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    Replied to CruelReality

    Thanks for the corrections!!

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    Replied to Graylies

    I couldn't find his name so I made it up, anyway he shouldn't come back often in the story...But if you want I could change it later

    Sylvano flashes a smile pointing his ears "You think my elf ears are just for decoration?"
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    Replied to hammer_dog

    Thank you very much for the message really!

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    Replied to Fisherman_Dream

    maybe, however if there is romance there will be no harem and no relationship like in the original story... thanks for the message!

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    Replied to AlexCyberHeart

    I'm sorry if you didn't enjoy the story! As for controlling his words, I see it more as a personality trait than a joke. throughout the story, Bakugo will have to face the consequences of his words... Even so, thank you for leaving a review

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    Replied to SEIKO

    yes honestly the last two chapters don't make much sense in relation to bakugo's personality, I'll probably delete them to make a parallel story and rewrite from the previous chapter.

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    Replied to HyperMan07

    Yes, Edward will still have low mana reserves, but he will be able to use the battle aura, and maybe his weakness in pure magic will be compensated by something else...

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    I'm thinking of changing the cover image, what do you think?
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    Replied to Binge_Reader69

    Thank you for the comment and sorry for the grammar, to answer the question I think maybe doing romance but in the future.

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