just following the tradition and rating my story 5 stars kol

that you for the update, hope you update soon

this was a great fight and his awakening of observational haki felt natural

so far through the first 4 chapters, the writting has been very solid and the background settings and character design has been intriguing, I hope this story continues and we get cannon events

that was great, i hope you update soon, your story technically is very solid with little to no grammatical or spelling mistakes, my only suggestion would be to be around cannon events in some way shape or form all the time, a huge part of the allure of oc fanfiction is how they effect the cannon and change it, most authors shy away from it because they are not confident in their ability to create an alternative story line that is compelling to read, the best fanfics are those that write compelling alternative scenarios, I hope we get to cannon sooner rather than later

thank you for the chapter, I like your choice of giving him abilities of martial artist MC's, i dont't want to see him suddenly throw death beams or some super op abilities, I want him to work hard and struggle to make new breakthroughs of strength, i also like the direction you have chosen for this as well, I hope we see that Zoro rematch soon toohope you update soon

that was good