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Agreed... Focus on top character Astron,Sylvie,Maya and Irina.. Other character,up till now just side character.. Even Ethan as the main character in the game just become sidekick in this "Astron version" of story Focus on Astron and his journey.. The person that matters to him.. How he overcome obstacles, his love story.. His fighting ability.. Side story is OK to me as long as if it free...but most of the people here paying for this chapter.. And money are hard to come by..
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pursue study as a backup.. I love your novel... i sure do.. but as a fan, i hope you can fulfill ur parent hope too.. whatever you 1 2 do in the future make sure you repay your parent 1st.. at least give them something that can make the proud as a parent... as a fan iIwill support you.. make sure in the future don't drop this novel..