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  • Rookie_Mistakes
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    great chapter as always. well done @thatsjustrich

    Ch 8 Seeds, Potential, and Tragedy
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    this is really unique. wasnt expecting a poem in this but it works i think. well done.

    Oh, how she chains me, my darling Madness."
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    I agree with Eres. never heal the enemy

    "What?! Heal the enemy?! The same human scum that crossed into our territory?! That murdered our warriors?! Our men, women, and children?!" Eres spat, a murderous aura surrounding her being. Vita didn't acknowledge her, instead choosing to turn to me, "Ryne you will leave here, head west towards our neighboring country of Ungues, we are allied to them, and they will grant you sanctuary."
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    God this is a good paragraph

    Tears ran rapidly down my cheeks. My legs shook, my fingers twitched, I was beyond the point of remembering any coping skills. In my life, or, well, in my old life, the only way I'd ever get out of it when I was this far gone was by talking to my dad. That was a big reason why I fell so far down, and why I never climbed back out when I did. When he died, my vice, my crutch, passed away with him. There was no helping me now. I was losing it.
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    I like her. Ryne needs someone like her

    "We all get scared sometimes, Ryne. Though, there's no reason to be with us. We won't hurt you, just as we know you won't hurt us. You don't have to trust us yet, but know that we trust you enough to let you free of your bonds. You are welcome here with us, if you wish to be."
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    Freaking AWESOME

    Ch 7 To Know Your Captors
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Commented

    I love how you put this in there. well done

    I got up myself and kept my hands at my sides, my fingers twitched ever so slightly at the prospect of her hands on my own.
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    I am hooked. Excited for the next chapter. Consistently good.

    Ch 6 To Speak Their Tongue
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    this is very different from your other book but still good. do you do custom comissions?

    Ch 1 Torb x Dva Fanfic 1
    Torb x Dva Fanfic 1
    Video Games · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Posted

    this story is awesome so far. I really like the concept and I'm very excited to see where it goes from here. Ryne is written very well.

    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    hot and funny. big good. do you do custom comissions too?

    Torb x Dva Fanfic 1
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    this story is really good. I'm enjoying it.

    Ch 5 Strange Creatures, Stranger People
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Commented

    he's not wrong tho 😂

    'What happens if they eat you? Realistically, what happens? You die? Big fucking deal.'
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    these description are so disgusting but so good! I hate them and love them lol

    I quickly covered my ears as a horrifying screech rang out from over my head. As I looked to the treetops, I saw hundreds of strange looking bugs swarming overhead. They were unlike anything I'd ever seen, my skin was crawling just from the sight of them. They weren't all that big, each one was only a few inches long. They had wings like hummingbirds, flapping faster than I could see. Humanlike faces, each one unique, with eyes rolled up into their skulls. Sharp talons stuck out from beneath their chins, making their already twisted appearance even more vile. They seemed to be fighting each other as they continued to screech, some biting, some clawing. I pulled my knees to my chest and rocked back and forth, fear overtaking me.
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    This is actually pretty dang good. excited for the next chapter. well done.

    Ch 4 The Price Of Death
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Commented

    this is great!

    Ch 3 Punchline
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Commented

    I like where this is going!

    Ch 2 The Connection Between Madness and Mirrors
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
    Commented

    good start!

    Ch 1 Prologue:
    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
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  • Rookie_Mistakes
    Rookie_Mistakes10mth
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    I like this. curious to see where it will go.

    Chaotika Chronicles: Viva La Vita
    Fantasy · ThatsJustRich
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