i hate whrn people who are in life and death battle dont fight with their all. it makes them dumb

is the persons name authors?

for real i am so bored i just skimmed this chapter. i keep saying dude gets too detailed about the power system. this is supposed to be a game world too. i think the authors never fully think that idea out

ehhh the more they make fighting sound like its need incredible math and formulas and u really really shine a light on that idea by focusing on it just makes it all that more unrealistic. its taking me out of the story too because i am remembering this is supposed to be a game as well..... like who would play that?

and we love u for it author san. usually cultivation novels are chineese and the way people in the crowd talk is annoying

hey author. if u release more chapters i would appreciate it

hollywood has dumbed down people into not realizing how real fights work. in todays day and age people would really think just because a person had a bronze sword fighting a steel sword that they still have a chance

author* making* why cant we edit comments

im about to drop this. its like suyhor is intentionally makinh story bad. everything we waiting on he ignores and gives us bs we dont want like some random chick pov. at least u could of updated us about han but nah

this story is starting to get boring even thoug theres so much i want the story to cover. i mean mc only fights or trains anymore and all the real dialogue is about characters we dont know or care about.i mean u could cover hans new way of life.mcs parents dinding outmc doing system stuff but no we get nathan chapters

hey author san could u imagine if the school had dress uniforms qnd ur dress uniform would include a colored stripe or something for each affinity u have and then like on a big day people could see his uniform and seethe. just a thought

better than what it was

reading this on new years eve going into 2024

he has a skill that lets him gain exp points by stealing mana from people but he hasnt upgraded it even one level even though it would improve his leveling up

why are explaining this again? stop it

hes seventeen

hey dude these super long paragraphs that should be in authors notes cost readers more coins because it counts in your word count. please stop this. you telling me every chapter u want power stones goes without saying. im less likely to donate to someone who annoys me asking me every chapter

i hate how hes not using this daily

ummm put a ton of stats into intwlligence dummy

i kind of agree. right now he almost died and hes getting bullied and a way to greatly increaase his stats and give him magic is right there and hes like maybe i will sell it with no job to pay for an apartment once money runs out