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Wait, do you mean that you will follow this novel until the end or after this novel you will not write any other novels (Google Translate is confusing, so what you mean is not clear, but I hope this is not your last novel)
Writing Quality5/5- I didn't notice any writing errors. Stability of Updates5/5- 20 chapters in less than a week and the existence of a p@tre0m give credibility to the stability of the update. Story Development5/5- I liked how the story has developed so far and I must admit that I'm interested in seeing where these changes will take the plot. Character Design5/5- the MC acts in accordance with his past and in a consistent manner. I copied the comment from someone else because it matches my review
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Leaving two girls younger than ten years old on the street alone is a recipe for disaster
I have a really bad feeling about this silence