Thank you for your honesty, to be honest I also realised that the first chapter of my novel is similar to LOTM. However, I can assure you that this novel uses a different concept from LOTM. Then, are you suggesting me to change the entire first chapter?

So, this novel doesn't have a fixed villain at all? It will be similar to the OPM manga?

So, Julius is now equivalent to a God-like existence?

How about you add a "save point" for future chapters. It's a pity if the MC has to keep restarting from the beginning if he's already quite strong. He will likely choose to be passive and avoid future battles if he has to keep restarting from the beginning.

So this tells a story of infinite repetition?

What is the need to make such a big deal out of a man's dignity just to ask for directions to the bathroom? It's not like a public place that has a signpost, it's a foreign palace that you've just moved into.

Cause u always have negative thinking

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Done

Thank you for correcting my writing mistakes.

Straight

I will read it

Thanks for your opinion, I have changed some things in chapter 2 so that there are no more paragraphs that are rewritten again in a different form. You can read it again if you want.

Sorry, Sometimes I forget about that

Because she was forbidden to do anything before the age of 8 by family rules. Also, children in this world are forbidden to practice magic before the age of 8 because their vessels are not strong enough.

Yea, I'll add some drama and action. BTW, Thanks for your review.