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A shameless Author review if you have any suggestions for this story you can suggest me here and if you have any questions or there's some mistakes you think I have made you can also show it here

The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

Thanks for your opinion. I'll be continuing the story with volume - 03 in a month. I'll keep in mind your pieces of advice.

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I'll change it as soon as I can

My man was awake for the last 36 hours And just in 2 days of being handed the case he's getting reprimanded What else can you expect?

Of course IRL USA wouldn't let them be protected by other countries no matter how weak they become They've got that strong ego

that's true for real-world specialists too

Thanks for the review

Thank you very much for your review

Only read chapters one to four at the moment I'm writing the review. I'll be honest It looks like the story has potential but it feels a little slow. A little better writing style and a faster pace should help boost the quality of your story. Keep it up. Good luck.

Thanks, Boss

That's my motto

I may have made Jacob freak out a bit too much But it goes with his character I guess

Thanks for your review The later chapters are quite longer almost 1000 words each so please keep reading

Thank's for your review. I would try to fix the issue as early as I can

The idea of this story came to me hearing this song