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YourAverage_Reader8dCommentedCh 2 Coward Hubert- YourAverage_Reader8dCommented
felt* maybe
The axe sharpened edge slashed on the tail of the horse. The barbarian left exhausted with air exhaled out of his respiratory system. - YourAverage_Reader8dCommented
i always imagine barbarian as orges
The barbarian jumped from his position, like a jumping frog, he was already in front of the squad of watchmen. He slashed at them horizontally from east to west with his great axe. But the squad was ready to accept his attack. - YourAverage_Reader8dCommented
if i had such subordinate i would be bored and gone to sleep long ago
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i don't find it logical a ragtag group as a first line of defence?? won't Enemy spy's easily penetrate borders. there is also chance of sudden secret invasion with lack of trainjng and equipment and facilities these watchman won't even be able to send msg of reinforcement or warning they will be massacred before that. why don't they just give that territory to some duke to protect it would be much logical as that's the real nobles duty or why there is nobles in first place.
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why is gregarious trilly working as watchman in north out post instead of working for his families knight order cause in most setting mages are quite coveted
This outpost housed a total of 20 watchmen, including Greyson, the captain of the watchmen of this post, Gregorious Trilly, a mage of the noble house of Trilly, and Hubert. - YourAverage_Reader11dReplied to ExQuartz_Roachina
make sense
"Brother Muran, did you perhaps take a fancy to that slave? Are you saving it for yourself?" - YourAverage_Reader11dCommentedCh 1 Ancient Apharoia
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i don't understand if they are just slave just take it for night who cares if you like that woman or anything like thag, just satisfy your frustration or strees that is what avg slave traders do
"Brother Muran, did you perhaps take a fancy to that slave? Are you saving it for yourself?" - YourAverage_Reader11dCommented
tbh i don't think that treatment is that bad.. many have done worse.
No matter how they groaned, wailed, and almost lost their voices from screaming in pain, their fate was sealed. - YourAverage_Reader11dCommented
typo??
Although some started to cry, and their hands reached the sky, their eyes were emptyâ€" void of any hope. - YourAverage_Reader14dReplied to 13KillerShadows
yup you can find those in doremon
The room was simple, open space with straw mat flooring. Sliding doors made of paper screens separated the room from the outside. Inside, low wooden tables were placed on the floor, surrounded by cushions for seating. The room was well-lit with soft, natural light filtering through the thin screens. - YourAverage_Reader15dCommentedCh 68 0068 - The Edge of Reality.
- YourAverage_Reader15dCommentedCh 68 0068 - The Edge of Reality.
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However, across the field, Qin Chen's gaze remained riveted on Liu Qian. There was something about her that drew him in, even though this was their first encounter. It was a puzzling feeling that he couldn't quite shake off. - YourAverage_Reader16dCommentedCh 66 0066 - Time’s Up! LU SHENG JENKINS!
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so tru
1) The start of the novel has its info-dump moments. I've tried to keep things in control but for a fresh novel to build up to its lore, info-dumps are unavoidable. - YourAverage_Reader17dReplied to OVERSEERSREAPS
yeah that get quite boring later on
'W-what am I saying!? I don't talk like that! What's happening here!?' (Jareth) - YourAverage_Reader19dReplied to DaoistCandle
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"Hold on, Qin Chen, don't surrender to a mere lightning strike; you're stronger than this!" Ning Yuan implored.