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I've been very busy for a couple of weeks, it's not that I'm not interested in continuing reading. I'll be back soon.
much better now, tftc
done
Stable updates and a promising story. With so many psycho MCs on this website it's nice to see a hero from time to time. give me more, give me moree
I will read them tomorrow when I wake up
It is well understood, but it is strange that they have the same name haha
The last few chapters feel a little fast. There is too much dialogue (in proportion to the total) and it is a little strange that there has been no reaction from Ryan, when meeting the first elf who didn't want to kill or enslave him, or when he arrived at the first elven city. Don't be afraid to take your time in scenes to describe the places, characters, emotions, or even the atmosphere. I am really liking the story and its potential!! (Sorry if my English is very bad, it's my third language)
elf politics must be interesting tftc
tftc
no pls...
tftc
tftc and for the detail, made me happy
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