It's too dam watery. Just him, preparing to devour the fire eats up the whole chapter. 😑 Chinese authors loves this kind of writing to squeeze as much money as they can without realizing that so much water content will make them lose readers. Their mindset became similar to those game developers that sucks as much money as they can before the game they made dies and creating a new one just to repeat the cycle.

Yeah. It makes me feel like almost all of the population of this version of MHA world are either braindead people or part of villain association trying to turn Naruto into a villain by pushing him on the very edge. It doesn't make any sense. The very fact that the video circulated around the world and still point him as murderer. And Naruto as well don't even take action as if he was born as a Masochist. He has cloning and transformation technique. He should make an example by using those two techniques to stage a villain attack on a level high level official and his real body will just conveniently pass by and watch while his transformed clones massacre their families leaving only the official alive. Once done, that official will definitely point at him for not helping. And of course the MC will reply, "Can't help, I don't have hero license. Isn't that the rule you made? So how can I help?". Too easy. He has too many ways as a ninja to mess around them without getting caught.

I somehow don't understand why they can't let this go. You write as if the people around the MC are brainless kids. Too depressing to read.

Zeldris's ability is also named Full Counter but it reflects physical attack.

The Qin Tian is not rewrite but a copy paste. Is the reason why it was discontinued.

No action and too much water = boring read.

His Will of Gluttony and Will of Sloth should give him Sin Points everyday. What kind of nerfing is this? The moment you gave your MC a cheat is bound to make him OP in a very short time. If you want to nerf him badly by intentionally halting his point earning, you shouldn't have given him cheat from the start. I hate these type of novels when the MC only gains power enough to pass his current dilemma. Like a level dungeon where the rewards you get from the cleared dungeon is only enough for the next level. Disgusting...

3 Months and his Sin Points is still 43,000?

So much water makes it boring. Please avoid adding lots of unnecessary information.

It's already ridiculous enough that he has to take some damage from some weaklings. And based on timeline alone, they should still be super weak as heck. I remember on whiskey peak, that guy got one punched and directly passed out.

So much BS! And just because the character showed in the original as a semi antagonist, this author hesitates to kill it. So ridiculous.

Becoming a warlord would be nice. With the current timeline, there should still be a lot of vacant position. I've read alot of OP fanfics but I almost didn't see anyone choosing to become a shichibukai role.