Everything about this fanfic is impressive other than James Potter character, who in Books and Movies shown to be one of the creators of the Magical Map (A impressive piece of Charms work) enchanted Sirius bike, become animagus at the age of 15, brew the animagus potion himself and also guided wormtail in the process, is shown as almost stupid compare to others and then writer asking who should Lily chose, a person who is shown almost stupid and with no future, hallmarks of every fanfic character destined to be cuckold and the person who was alive all this time and was partner with guys who made almost all advancements and was continuously learning new things compare to the person who was resurrected when everything was all said and done.

What no secret training, oh maybe James Potter is a secret tire 12 void lifeform of cuckold and Mc will have to defeat him in the end.To stop others from becoming a cuckold.

Oh I get it, in the coming chapters James Potter will go on secret training, get strong and then attack Lilly and Snape then Lily will use Ancient Magic "Protection from Cuckold Husband" James Potter attack will fail then Snape counterattack will kill James Potter after that Lily and Snape will walk into sunset.