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Ten_Zero

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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    This line and the previous two just puts me off. It's like MC is self-aware that he's the MC in a story.

    "This impending change... I will grasp it firmly and be reborn with it," Nova thought about his previously monotonous life.
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    Apex Star
    Fantasy · Zefyr
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to Nickaido

    Because like the other person said, the reviews are not just for you. They are for the readers too. Just because you can't learn from it, doesn't mean the readers can't either.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to tallman644

    This is why even the most terribly written story or poorly translated novels on this site get four stars and more. Authors can literally manipulate the ratings and the majority of them are unapologetic about it.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to Nickaido

    So, you're basically admitting that you delete negative reviews based on whether they are constructive or not, instead of true or false. Wow... This is so shameless. So, if a review is positive but outright false, will you delete those?

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to pipagamer

    This is just terrible writing. Author leaves nothing to the reader's imagination. Everything is spelt out to a tee for the audience. There is no showing in this story, only telling.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to Nikhil_Bannerjee

    Sadly, this is the standard of webnovel. Cringy stuff like this is considered cool and awesome. I have shut off my brain but I don't think I can shut off my cringe receptors

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    What kind of writing is this??

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    yeap, author is definitely a teenager in a phase. No way an adult would think having some muscles is going to prevent people from looking down on him considering this a world of fantasy and magic.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    Feeling good about himself just because he threw some profanity around? I think the author might be a teenager in a phase.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Replied to TurtleOfRainbow

    Apparently, trash like this is considered great or amazing by the standards of webnovel. So, it won't get any better. It would only get worse.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    MC is so delusional. It's like he's self-aware of his status as the protagonist of a story. This is multiple level of cringe.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero5mth
    Commented

    Dear god... this is cringe. Honestly, the self-insert element of this novel is way too glaring. He has nothing to back up all of this. lol. It's literally plot armour protecting him from being just straight-up dragged into a back-alley and get crippled outright.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Replied to Liam_Kelley_6064

    Professional only by webnovel's standards.

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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Replied to Priyanshu_Gupta_1532

    Wow you are really gung-ho at doing free PR for the author.

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    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Commented

    Wish it was the same for IRL.

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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Commented

    Oh god... please don't let this be a writer's remorse.

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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Commented

    This novel is a full-on "tell, don't show" kind of writing.

    Damian listened to it and could not agree more. What Magnus said made sense, but the only problem was how far was the school? No one knew the exact place they were in, and now that the bus driver and the school's supervisor were gone, no one knew how to get there!
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    All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins
    Fantasy · Ryongul
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Commented

    That was so on the nose.

    Damian could tell Aurora was someone who cared about others, but that could eventually bite her in the ass. He was no idiot, and it was clear that inside the Garmony Upper School, students were selfish, and the competition was fierce.
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    All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins
    Fantasy · Ryongul
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Replied to Pedro_Sousa

    How ironic.

    "I wish I had the power to move this bus, but I am tired now," Damian thought as he put Aurora near a tree, waiting for her to return to her senses.
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    All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins
    Fantasy · Ryongul
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  • Ten_Zero
    Ten_Zero10mth
    Replied to mnc777

    This kind of attitude is high society to you?

    "Come here, and I am sorry for touching you without consent," Damian said as he grabbed Aurora.
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    All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins
    Fantasy · Ryongul
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