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This line and the previous two just puts me off. It's like MC is self-aware that he's the MC in a story.
This is just terrible writing. Author leaves nothing to the reader's imagination. Everything is spelt out to a tee for the audience. There is no showing in this story, only telling.
Sadly, this is the standard of webnovel. Cringy stuff like this is considered cool and awesome. I have shut off my brain but I don't think I can shut off my cringe receptors
What kind of writing is this??
yeap, author is definitely a teenager in a phase. No way an adult would think having some muscles is going to prevent people from looking down on him considering this a world of fantasy and magic.
Feeling good about himself just because he threw some profanity around? I think the author might be a teenager in a phase.
Apparently, trash like this is considered great or amazing by the standards of webnovel. So, it won't get any better. It would only get worse.
MC is so delusional. It's like he's self-aware of his status as the protagonist of a story. This is multiple level of cringe.
Dear god... this is cringe. Honestly, the self-insert element of this novel is way too glaring. He has nothing to back up all of this. lol. It's literally plot armour protecting him from being just straight-up dragged into a back-alley and get crippled outright.
Professional only by webnovel's standards.
Wish it was the same for IRL.
Oh god... please don't let this be a writer's remorse.
This novel is a full-on "tell, don't show" kind of writing.
That was so on the nose.
How ironic.
This kind of attitude is high society to you?