I read all the chapters till now and I didn't like it, the story is exactly like another story "Riser phenex isn't a villain" by akikan and this is extremely rushed I was reading it and suddenly the MC kisses akeno. So this is like the riser phenex isn't a villain but worse

I am being based but I really like your fanfic hope that this will be better than the riser one because I don't know why but I don't really liked that one I didn't hate it but just didn't liked it than your other fanfic so i hope this will be better.

I came here after seeing the cover expecting that it will me great one the greatest fic of Naruto but alas I am truly disappointed 😔😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

Umm can you also add honkai star rail it is also from mihoyo

Read all the chapters till now I have say It's Really great. I am huge fan of group chat fanfic so I hope you don't drop it and best of luck for your journey of being a writer.

There are way to many unique skill here you should change them to extra skill after all unique skill aren't common

I really liked the description 👍 I wanted to ask How many girls will MC get in this world.

I don't have to say anything except that this is really fuck*Ng good after all yandare is love . Keep up the good work and please don't drop it.

Well let's start the journey👍✅

The premise is good but the translation is just horrible he doesn't even change characters name to the original. I think he just uses Google translation.

I really like the idea of it. For now I will add it to my collection and read it after it having some more chapters, hope you don't drop it.

Just for ntr😨😰😥😰😢😨😥😨😥😢😰😥😨😢😰😥😨😮😥😨. . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . .. .. . .. . . .. . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .

It's shiraori fan fic so I had to give it 5 Star but it isn't the fact it's shiraori fanfic that I give it 5 Star no it's the fact that your other fanfic was really great so I hope this will be great like other fic of yours.

I was really happy to see this fic where MC becomes Luffy but after reading it my happiness shattered like glass his devil fruit is replaced by moa moa no mi [The Moa Moa no Mi is a Paramecia-class Devil Fruit that allows the user to amplify the size and speed of any object they touch] let's be honest here Luffy isn't great I mean Fun with out his gomu gomu no mi.

Just wanted to know who will be waifus

I just wanted to say that please don't drop it and one more thing I hope that he goes in adventure or make his own kingdom and becomes a demon lord. By the way It's really good till now.

I just wanted to ask in future will our MC go separate way than staying with luminous after the death of their creator[I think in original work luminous killed twilight right]. I hope she goes her separate way and goes on an adventure and becomes a demon lord [I hope].

It's nor good nor bad it's just decent read it's Chinese so you should know how it will be and This Translator author some times or someone name doesn't even translate. it is bad in my opinion.

I always wanted to see a person Reincarnate as a slime in to the world of I am spider so what? Or Reincarnate as spider in to the world of Tensura and seeing this I am really happy with it. I have read all the chapters till now and it's honestly really good and I hope you won't drop it and good luck in your journey of being a writer. _________Nis_74_______

Tensura is one of my favourite anime/novel out there and it's really great to have its fanfic out here. I have read all the chapters till now and I have to say its great it definitely deserves 5 star. _________Nis74_______