man come on I mean why u take the marks topic friking 4 ch long but your story telling is awesome I loved reading your noval

I take back my words your doing a good job your way of telling the story is also very good .

I am angry because the price of the technology that protagonist provide is too friking low it's should be in billions not millions well other then that every thing is good and I can understand the reason why but still increase the price a little