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  • Xjj
    Xjj9mth
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    Lol, this isn't good at all. The protagonist is mix of the worse traits, such as being obnoxious and clueless, with neither thoughts or plans, and has a personality of a child with npc level intelligence. His abilities are just being lucky and eating food, completely ignoring any magic and spells, simply because he's too lazy to do anything. The plot itself is just illogical nonsense, that consists of random events put together without any reason/structure, and anything interesting is replaced with mindless slice of life and unbearable soap opera drama, that contributes nothing to the plot. The writing, worldbuilding and dialogue is laughable that will make you feel like your are reading a children's book.

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    Harry Potter: The Boy Who Eats[COMPLETE]
    Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
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  • Xjj
    Xjj10mth
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    The protagonist is unlikable and one dimensional that has access to everything and can do anything. The plot is slow with only two or three important events, the writing makes it readable but not great, and the romance is bad.

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    Naruto: Clan of Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
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  • Xjj
    Xjj10mth
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    Overall it's decent. He is smart and the story is promising. Hoping to see unique evolutions and development, perhaps some exploration of other worlds, alliances, alternative conclusions, or missed opportunities to the original storyline arcs.

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    Ben 10: 11000
    TV · H3LI0S
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