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RuminatingReader6mthCommentedNot much of a surprise. I mean, this is a ghost story, right? Also, the mother and daughter did supply 3000 ghost coins. Those had to have come from somewhere.. I still don't know why he didn't question it more. ...either that or Lucy just got herself invited to an instance.
Was a cemetery!- RuminatingReader6mthCommented
How heavily can one necromancer step on a head?
It dyed the Necromancer's shoes and clothes red under the moonlight. - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
He's going to need that endurance. And the coins to replenish it.
Endurance: 22 - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
Fierce or Evil?
Partner: Su Rong (Fierce Ghost) - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
So, how old was he supposed to be currently? Not counting his previous life?
However, his current body was still essentially a boy's, and this intense new experience was quite the change. - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
So, we're going there any way, huh..
"Shh!" As Alexander was speaking, Su Rong suddenly leaned forward, pressing herself against his chest, and placed a cold finger on his lips, "We have plenty of time. Let me serve you first, okay? I want to give my Master an unforgettable coming-of-age gift!" - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
How does intimacy and friendship equal slave contract? Isn't that a contradiction? And how would any ghost allow this?
"Congratulations on reaching a 100-point peak in favorability. Skill 'Social Communication Unhindered Charm Syndrome' special effect triggered! Obtain Su Rong's ultimate friendship reward, the Ghost Slave Contract!" - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
Needs translation. The English version uses letters, not characters for names.
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Didn't we see this already?
As long as you can save Sofia, I will do anything for you! From now on, everything of mine is yours, and I will do whatever you want!" - RuminatingReader6mthReplied to awesomedbarp
Yummy
Recruitment conditions: attentive, courageous, attractive appearance, with healthy limbs, tender flesh, and willing to contribute to the restaurant. - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
Didn't he enter this world only five years ago? Or am I misremembering?
Sophia had perfectly inherited her mother's devastatingly beautiful looks. Although her figure was far from matching her mother's, the youthful charm she possessed was no less lethal to Alexander, who had, in fact, lived two lifetimes. - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
Those item names keep changing. .
Ghost Items: Bloodstained Baseball Bat (Wronged Soul Level), Hard Door Cigarettes (Evil Spirit), Tombstone Rose (Evil Spirit), Joss Paper *10 - RuminatingReader6mthReplied to RuminatingReader
Also, a better distinction between ghosts and non-ghosts. Sometimes it's difficult to tell who is being referenced in the text. For example, the middle aged man who refused to hand over his notebook.
Although the teachers on the podium were also ghosts, aside from the beautiful female teacher who had initially performed a horrifying act by popping out her eyeballs, exploding her arm, and removing her hand, they hadn't done any harm to the chosen ones afterward. - RuminatingReader6mthCommented
This needs to be properly described. It was stated that she ate something, but it was not described what exactly it was.
Although the teachers on the podium were also ghosts, aside from the beautiful female teacher who had initially performed a horrifying act by popping out her eyeballs, exploding her arm, and removing her hand, they hadn't done any harm to the chosen ones afterward. - RuminatingReader8mthReplied to EmberWyldes
Is that why?! I thought they were just comical geniuses..
"Th-T-That's no-not isht-..." She bit her tongue as she was trying to deny it. - RuminatingReader8mthCommented
And yet he wasn't affected by sitting on a world in full sprint.. At least his "wives" won't be puking their guts out this time.
The carriage ride wasn't as pleasant as Ein thought. The vibrations from the small pebbles as the wheels rolled over them were directly transferred to his rear. In just a few hours of riding, his butt-cheeks were already starting to get numb. - RuminatingReader8mthCommented
That's a convenient after thought..
On the way to the forest, Ein explained everything to the two of them. Nayta and Melina, therefore, knew that they were supposed to be tracking the mastermind of Sophia's attempted assassinations. - RuminatingReader8mthReplied to RuminatingReader
Not to mention small exposition dumps with world building aside from character backgrounds.
The guild acted similarly to a bar as a side hustle. The group stayed inside the guild and ordered some food and drinks to pass the time. They were waiting for the flood of adventurers during rush hour. Time passed quickly as the three chatted idly. Then, after a few hours passed, a commotion was heard from outside the guild. - RuminatingReader8mthCommented
But what do they actually talk about? How do they talk to each other? Great potential for character building is lost, when the plot wants to move faster.
The guild acted similarly to a bar as a side hustle. The group stayed inside the guild and ordered some food and drinks to pass the time. They were waiting for the flood of adventurers during rush hour. Time passed quickly as the three chatted idly. Then, after a few hours passed, a commotion was heard from outside the guild.