Really looking forward to the great things we achieve in this

everything is all going great. Love the hype, character development and the storyline. really thrilled to see where this goes!

Very well written. The story is really good and the characters really flow well with the arc. Still need to work a little bit on writing quality though, overall it really great reading this. Hope for the best..

Really like the direction of the story, it's just too good, though the story still need to be polished like removing some grammatical blunders so there can be no mistakes. Asides that "BRAVO!! "