Any thoughts on the chapter would be appreciated

Shameless author review here. I'm commenting to interact with all of you, if anyone has any questions regarding the novel pls feel free to ask. If u have any suggestions or ideas on what I should add to the plot you're more than welcome to comment it. The novel is gonna be really long cuz I have most of the story planned out(in my head). I know you might be wondering why I'm writing so many novels at the same time and yes, ik it's weird but I js love writing. I'll be discontinuing the Lunal of infinity cuz I don't rly like writing it ngl. I'll be focusing on this novel and Hell walker. Mainly this and occasionally a hell walker chapter. Feel free to ask/comment anything. (I'll also be creating a discord server soon)

Author here. It would be appreciated if the ppl reading the novel support it in any kind. Comments would also be very much appreciated. Plz keep supporting it

Reviews are appreciated if you have any questions about the novel I'd be happy to answer(not spoilers). Suggestions are also preferred :]

I'd also like to thank my friend Prek(I'll drop his discord tag Prek#8995) for helping me with this chapter and a lot of new ideas that will be appearing in later chapters.

Author here, first of all I'd like to thank the people who are reading my novel. Second I'd like to mention this is the first time I'm writing a novel so I'd be glad if you guys would be patient with me and watch the story develop. I'll be interacting with u guys in the comments actively! so if u have any questions that aren't spoilers I'd be happy to tell. Thank you for reading my novel.