Ooh, Pacific Rim! Great choice my friend, it's very difficult to find a good Pacific Rim fanfic, I'm looking forward to yours!!!

It would be interesting if the protagonist occasionally saved the good guys, not to gain their favor (or forgiveness, so to speak), but simply because he felt like doing so. By the way, it would also be nice if Amari showed some empathy, even if small, for someone or a group of people. Being a deity doesn't mean being devoid of feelings.

Hi, it's me again. Could you read my response to your comment in the previous chapter (71)? I left something quite interesting there; it might help you get ideas on how to steer the story without losing track of it.

I agree that the protagonist was too arrogant, and it would be good if he improved his apathetic personality towards humanity a bit. As for the fact that the Justice League seems very miserable, well, that's understandable given everything that has happened so far, and I also understand why you want to give it some dignity, but I honestly don't think the best way to do this is to make the protagonist act as if he were following Superman's or Batman's lead. That goes against Amari's established personality. I'm not against Amari and the Justice League working together on a case, as long as the personality of each of the "forces" is respected. Amari and the Justice League can work together on a case, but in parallel, each in their own way, so that in the end they "join forces," and at that moment, the protagonist proves that his way of doing things can be better than the League's. By the way, what about Amari wanting to rule the world? Is that not going forward?

Right. Could you go back to telling the story in third person? And regarding the MC's behavior in relation to the justice league, I believe that the protagonist fits the concept of "third force". The first force would be the world government (with its selfish interests), the second force would be the heroes (with their altruistic interests) and the third force would be precisely the protagonist, who follows his own principles, whether he is against or in favor of the other two. other forces

I hated the changes to the plot. In addition to the story being narrated in the first person (which breaks the entire rhythm and immersion), the protagonist Amari begins to act as if he were submitting to Superman, even after the big battle he and the league had in Gotham. That's ridiculous! "Ah, but this is all just an act, the MC will troll everyone in the end." Look, this is not in his character! He is not this kind of secretive person.

Muito bom, continue. Brasil aqui 🇧🇷💚

Waiting for more extra chapters...

Short chapter 🥲

I'm glad the author started writing again after a long time, I hope he's doing well. But I didn't like that he added the famous "point of view" to the story, the only point of view we had before was Alex/Notch himself, and now we have Ana's point of view, where she narrates the facts starting with the pronoun "I". I didn't like this change so much, I preferred it when the only point of view was from alex/notch, however, since the author wants to conduct the work in this new way, so he adds the tag [POV XXX] [END POV XXX] start and finalize the point of view of a given character.

There was no other way, magneto needs to be removed from the scene. With people like him, there's no point trying to argue, and the films are there to prove it. I just wonder what the impact of this will be on the world.

Is it just me or are the chapters getting shorter?

Great chapter. I'm really enjoying this new arc and I'm expecting great things from it. By the way, will Thor lose his hammer? If yes, then when? And when will the events of Iron Man 2 take place?

This ESW arc is very good and promising. Looking forward to more chapters.

Am I the only one who really thinks that Bubble adds nothing to this story other than a little fan-service? For me, he's not missed at all, and I hope the author doesn't try to create a drama around him.

Essa é a sua melhor fanfic, e é uma lástima que esteja por tanto tempo parada. Você deveria tentar terminar essa sua novel, antes de tentar uma nova. Quando teremos capítulos novos?