GTHarris08
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Ok, I'll give it to you, you have one of the best first chapters I have read. the story is dynamic and has a natural flow, and the mc is relatable and enjoyable to read about. I really like your writing style and the plot is definitely worth reading. I look forward to more chapters soon! keep up the good work.
Great job! You finally wrote something actually worth reading! Tai is a well crafted 3D character whose plight is very understandable. The world background is lacking a bit though, but let's just say that it's because the work is still in it's starting chapters. I look forward to seeing more and more chapters!🤞🤞
Ok.. The first two chapters are kinda dark.. But the writing style is impeccable and the story flows really well. hope to see how Alex escapes tho
Whoa, Nova. Really dark start
it probably does
level up hypermarketer🤜🤛
her golden finger!!!
well that sucks
he didn't die, did he?